I was so happy to see the next part of this and Vanyel and Yfandes reunited at last! I did appreciate Vanyel seeming to make peace with many people and issues plaguing him- it’s good to see him somewhat more stable and joyful. I do find Tantras a bit irksome, but I see why you made him that way— and he is better by the end as well.

I’m really missing Stefen in this part, but only because he’s my favorite, ever. I think you do a good job here of showing why Vanyel wouldn’t have had a partner for so long, what with all the insanity in his life.