A Song for Two Voices - Book 7 [the rest of it]

[swimmer963]

Finally done!

I'm linking the entire "book" here, since it's really a single unit and the previous draft was incomplete, but obviously you can skim or skip the first half if you read the previous draft. (There are a few relatively minor changes to existing scenes, and some number of bonus new scenes). 

The new material contains:
*Most of all, MOAR STEF!!! 
*Also more Jisa!!!
*Stef and Jisa being friends and getting up to shenanigans. 
*Some badly needed followup between Van and 'Fandes
*More Lissa content
*An extremely awkward Ashkevron family reunion dinner 
*Drama. All the drama. Book 7 is literally just 150K words of straight social drama over about a week. 

Book 7 full version epub
Book 7 full version mobi

Comments

[fossore]

I've been reading through this entire series over the past few days (AO3 says I finished reading the first one on the 10th which...) and I absolutely love it. The changes you've made are believable, and mesh so well with canon, and the way you've change Ma'ar into something with justification is incredible. The whole framework of the conversations is also brilliant to add depth to everything.

I'm not actually finished with this one, it's just that I got to Melody's comment about talking to gods doing Bad things to the inside of one's head and all I could thing of was "This is your brain on gods" like those old PSAs. I'm really liking all of this fallout though and I'm really excited to read what happens next!

[swimmer963]

Glad you're enjoying it! Oh man, yeah, that is hilarious and I'm now imagining Melody doing recorded PSAs of all the things she's needed to tell Vanyel off for doing over the years...

FYI that the stuff posted on this forum is first drafts, and I have second drafts done now for 7 and 8. (7 in particular had a fairly serious rewrite). If you want the newer versions, feel free to pm me your email address and I can send over :)