VAN IS SO AMAZING and yeah, I was actually worried there was too much choppiness & emotional whiplash due to there being three competing dynamics of what the hell is going on. I actually wrote all the negotiation stuff that goes beforehand, but then realised it was a pile of unnecessary melodrama as far as the porn was concerned - I shall amnesty those scenes shortly, I guess.
I promise I will only use terrible porn cliches ironically :(
eta: complete inability to believe that anyone could ever really want him - it struck me a while ago that when Van dragged Stef back to his room for their first date he claimed his primary goal was to stop Stef from liking him. Oh Van. /otp tangents always
no subject
I promise I will only use terrible porn cliches ironically :(
eta: complete inability to believe that anyone could ever really want him - it struck me a while ago that when Van dragged Stef back to his room
for their first datehe claimed his primary goal was to stop Stef from liking him. Oh Van. /otp tangents alwayseta2: amnesty'd